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daleluck1313 Figment of a Figment
Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:20 am Post subject: Evil Me |
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I've always had someone with me that looks exactly like me, but he is one angry guy.
When I say something he says the total opposite of it and we have an argument out loud. At school he's always sitting on my table or standing near where I am, hating everything, shouting at me. If any of my friends told you I cry randomly, it's because of him.
He makes me so mad sometimes, I end up either attempting to commit suicide or hurting myself.
He always reminds me of all the bad things in my life, telling me to kill myself, telling my theres nothing left. At the moment he's calling me an idiot.
He's agreed with me on few occasions and actually smiles and laughs when I end up getting so crazy and hurting someone else. It's like we change into each other in those moments. _________________ A new day is here, Why do I not see,
The amazing sunset's astounding beauty? |
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ArcT Superior Figment

Joined: 22 Jan 2007 Posts: 238 Location: Sheffield, UK
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 8:29 am Post subject: |
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That sounds quite realistic, actually. Work out why you think he's like that. He sounds like a wonderful interesting character, with a whole back-story you can find out about and exploit. Where does he come from? Why is he so against you? What might have happened to him to make him like he is?
Try having a written conversation with him. Write something, and wait for your pen to answer for you. It might take a while, but eventually, you'll be writing and writing and developing something awesome and new and exciting you didn't expect. Maybe you remind him of someone he used to know. Maybe you ARE someone he used to know, but doesn't any more.
Keep on truckin' with him - sounds like a difficult character to create, because you're very emotionally attached to him, I can see. He's going to be a good addition to any story you put him in. _________________ And you can't fight the tears that ain't coming
Or the moment of truth in your lies
When everything seems like the movies
Yeah you bleed just to know you're alive
And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am |
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daleluck1313 Figment of a Figment
Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:11 am Post subject: |
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He's my imaginary enemy. He IS me, so of course I remind him of someone he knows...
I'll try that paper thing...
In my new school, he's attempted killing most of my teachers and people who stand near me, but , of course, can't. _________________ A new day is here, Why do I not see,
The amazing sunset's astounding beauty? |
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Ruralin Figment of a Figment

Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 95 Location: Scotland
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 11:05 am Post subject: |
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wow, you could research if there's a disorder or something that makes people violent so they have to restrain and this Evil Me (you) could be the strange being lashing out and the main character struggling against it.
Wow, inspirational char. Dale! _________________ "and it’s not difficult to get in them, the trick is getting out… conscious." - 'Viper Academy,' my novel in process. |
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daleluck1313 Figment of a Figment
Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:39 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, he'd make an excellent character in a story if he was used in that way.
It might calm him down.
EDIT:
Once in my old school, this guy hit me for calling him by his middle name and this "evil me" disappeared, and I punched the other guy in the face about five times and hit the teacher when he was holding me back, then I ran off upstairs and the "evil me" came back and was mocking me while I cried. _________________ A new day is here, Why do I not see,
The amazing sunset's astounding beauty? |
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butterflii Story Teller

Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 1612 Location: (rock) ME (hard place)
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 9:00 am Post subject: |
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wow i think this could be a really interesting character and storyline to have. You could make it out as a disorder like schizophrenia where a person has split personalities. Please right a story or something containing this character, i can't wait to see what you come up with.
*Shivers with excitment*  _________________ Spider, Spider, on the wall.
Have you got no sense at all?
Can't you see the walls been plastered.
Now you're stuck you stupid . . . spider. |
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daleluck1313 Figment of a Figment
Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:16 am Post subject: |
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O.o excitement? I want you shaking with fear, baby, YEAH! Lol.
O.o, I kind of went into chav-mode then, sorry.
It was my birthday on Thursday, I'm now 13! WOOH! _________________ A new day is here, Why do I not see,
The amazing sunset's astounding beauty? |
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