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The Grey Dawn
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Well who knows maybe I am the bad guy. Very Happy)

I waited around the back of the store until darkness set. Then I pulls out my tools and prepared my entry.
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Hawkins
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(no, I think you are. next thing you know you'll have the entire mafia out after Dragon and I like a pack of raving dogs. xD)

I grinned and toyed with my new berreta. I took the silencer off my .44 and fitted it onto my new gun. "Doesn't fit..." I muttered, shoving it in my pocket. "No matter. I can always make a new one." A crash from around the corner startled me. I peered around, and there, of course, was Grey Dawn. I wasn't about to confront him again; but I still sat back and watched what he was up to.

(I actually do know how to make a silencer. ^^)
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The Grey Dawn
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(But I don't have any mafia connections, and I have no reason to kill either Dragon or you... yet.)

I moved further into the alleyway and checked to make sure I was not being followed, then I moved to the door and began to manipulate the lock until the door opened and I entered.

(Plus I'm more likely to kill you myself Very Happy)
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Hawkins
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(you're evil. and I hate you. *rofl*)

I knew that Grey Dawn was going to get in trouble; and following him would get me in trouble as well. But I followed him nonetheless. Besides; if I could prove he was up to no good, I could have this case all to myself. Leaving his dead body on the floor would be good enough for me; I thought bitterly.

(who says I can't get there first? BWAHAHAHA.)
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(It's a race for... for what exactly?)

I found the file cabinets relatively quickly and started leafing through the past days orders. Nothing. I looked again. Only two people had bought any guns for the past week, Hawkins and Dragon, and I did not think either of them were trying to kill me. Where was golden angel hair?
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(let's say that Figment and butterfli have been...kidnapped. or they exploded and we found their pitiful remains in ditch. *ROFL* They just disappeared; and we need a motive. *pause* I GOT A NEW PEN. ^^)

I growled. It just figured that I had bought a handgun and /only/ that. And of course, I figure this out on a stake out. I really need to think these things through more, I thought to myself.

(I do that sort of thing all the time. xD)
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(PEOPLE (other than Hawkins and me) YOU CAN JOIN TOO YOU KNOW!!!! Oh and Dragon he's here sometimes.)

Jimmy. He was tied to her somehow. I might have to do something a little more... drastic if I wanted any information. I might need some help for this too. I snuck out of the store and walked to my office.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(you don't even care about my new pen? *sob*)

I cackled like a maniac. I had nearly stood in front of Grey Dawn and he hadn't noticed me. Today was a good day. I was about to leave when I tripped over a file drawer he left open. "Obviously," I muttered; standing up. I was about to slam it shut when I noticed a file poking out. I took it out and cocked an eyebrow. "A berreta /and/ two other handguns? As much as I'd love more destructive things lying around, I--" I rolled my eyes. "Jimmy." I snapped.

(Tyler's watching Friends. this is funny show. ^^)
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Well you see, I'm a pencil person, pens annoy me, probably cause I need to rewrite almost everything to make it legible.)

Upon reaching my office, my hands were shaking, so I took a shot of whiskey, letting the fire burn through my veins. Then I lit up a cigarette and laid back to relax for awhile.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 4:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(but my pen is made from a FEATHER! I found an eagle feather outside, took an ink cartridge from a different pen and stuck it in there. IT'S SO PRETTY! ^^)

"I /knew/ it!" I cried; staring at my receipt. I looked for a different one; Dragons. I could only imagine that his would be quite large...

(Tyler thinks its dumb; so I poked him in the head with a crow feather. I collected feathers today. Very Happy)
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Well why didn't you say so?! Quills are cool, despite the fact that they write with inks.)

The smoke swirled and danced in the room. Each tendril of smoke telling a different story. A story about a boy and his father. A story of a boy's dream. A story of a boy and an eagle. Each a faint echo from my past. I closed my eyes before I had to see it again.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I know it's the bomb. ^^ I should add that to arts and crafts section. 'cause it's awesome.)

I flicked through the other files. "Hey, there's another one of me," I said, taking it out. "Six .44's and a machine gun?! What kind of scam is this?" I cried, pawing through others. "Maybe this 'Jimmy' guy got a wig," I said, kicking the drawer shut and heading outside. I was onto Jimmy, but I couldn't help but wonder how many obvious clues I had wandered right past. It wouldn't be the first time, I thought, rolling my eyes.

(I NOMINATED YOU FOR GRAMMAR NAZI. HAHA!)
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Yea, I get on Dragon's case about that a lot don't I... DRAGON! FIX YOUR GRAMMAR!!!! XD)

A cold darkness crawled into the room. Even through my closed eyes I could see the bright flash from the gun. I could see the body falling. I could see my mother's terrified eyes. I could see the killers grinning teeth.

(Character development!)
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(aw, Grey Dawn was traumatized. *hugs 'till you snap in half* uh...uh...*gets roll of duct tape* he was sideways to begin with, honest.)

Jimmy must be at a bar or something by now, I thought to myself. Well that's good, in any case. People aren't as scary when they've been at a bar all night. I scratched my leg. Unless they're Grey Dawn.

(Pommie got a new avatar. it's too mathmatical. *twitch* I don't like it. xD)
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I like Pommie's new avatar. As much as I hate math. Says the kid who sits in math class trying to convince the teacher that 2+2=5. Yeeeeeeeah. I'm pretty close too. I've proved some weird stuff. Also WOO! I'm a scary drunk!)

"NO!" my voice ripped through the night. By shear force of will I broke the past. I took out my whiskey and poured myself a shot. And another. And another. This was going to be a long night.

(And what do I do? Get drunk again. I think I must spend half my time drunk or something.)
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